Here’s my haiku for today, on the topic of Youth:
crowds of naked hyacinths
poke and shove and thrust
At the end of each month I’ll gather up the haikus in the “Haiku Comments” that meet the criteria and pick one at random in a drawing, and send the winner of the drawing one of my e-books: your choice of Haiku for the Seasons I, or Haiku for the Seasons II.
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Arising slowly,
cursing every ache and pain;
I long for my youth.
scabby knees, flip flops,
roller skates, lightning bug nights…
memories of youth
No haiku (haven’t written one in umpteen years), but did want to say how great yours was!
Helen
Straight From Hel
Thanks, Helen! I am constantly blown away by how wonderful and often surprising the haiku contributions to “Haiku Friday” are. Creativity is contagious.