Comments on: Haiku Friday: Crying

By: Kim

Kim — Sun, 14 Jun 2009 13:12:50 +0000

Wow. Great haiku this Friday. Nostalgia for a lost love, the moment of birth, the recurring need to cry, wow again. Thanks everyone for sharing.

Anne Lindsay — Sat, 13 Jun 2009 19:22:28 +0000

Another one. This was when Fiona was born…..

A beautiful face
is all I could see of her
my child with red eyes.

Thanks KIm.

Tami Murray Cline — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 23:25:42 +0000

I’m out of practice but here goes:

Why is it each month
overwhelming longing
to release the flood?

Ryan Rosser — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 16:17:24 +0000

Saw this on Twitter. I like it and will have to check it out from time to time. Here’s my haiku:

Tears stream down my face
as I remember her name
from so long ago.

Anne Lindsay — Fri, 12 Jun 2009 15:48:07 +0000

Good Morning Kim. Here is my friday haiku or senryu, as the case may be…

Emotions run wild….a welling emits a sob….tears flow for hours.